Friday, December 19, 2008

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it fucking swells
turns the oceans instide out
crustaceans on their backs
and whales sick from the oxygen
it fucking grows
the impending doom upon our sea life
the ocean it fucking swells
it brings its own end
along with those seaside dwellers
their lives are over, their homes are gone
at the hands of poseiden
his mighty trident
his fucking will
his fucking will
HIS FUCKING WILL
unearths the undersea volcanoes
it unearths the business of fallen heroes
and between our hands
no one is a hero
everyone is fucked
everyone is a piece of god damn shit
and I know
because I live the life you live
and I fuck the scum you fuck
and i confide in the wealth you do
we are one in the same
you fucking masacre of a human being
you fucking regular.
you fucking mess.

2 comments:

Sarah said...

I've read this piece a lot and played around with it a bit in my head- hope you don't mind. Anyways, this is what I came up with in the end. Just my thoughts on your work. You keep writing too.

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it swells
turns the oceans inside out
flips crustaceans on their backs
and drowns whales on dirty air

it swells
turns the oceans inside out
bringing its own end:
all those seaside dwellers
their homes are gone.

It swells
at the hands of Poseidon's mighty trident
unearthing the business of fallen heroes

But between our hands
no one is a hero
everyone is fucked
everyone is worthless

and I know because I live the life you live
and I fuck the scum you fuck
and I confide in the wealth you do
we are one in the same
you fucking disgrace of a human
you fucking regular.
you fucking mess.

Sarah said...

post something damnit!